Role descriptions and systems list interrupt the flow of the rules. Should be at the end, or on a separate sheet.
Requirements
3/3
Introduction
3/3
Overview
1/3
"How the Game Works" offers a hint, but this should be added/expanded. Section on the shop page below the video would be a good start.
Component List
5/5
Component Pictures
2/3
Don't need to show them ALL, just a representative of each; takes a lot of real estate as is. Could add "in several colors" if only showing one pawn, or better, list number of each color.
Setup
10/10
Excellent, shows pieces & places. The two alert cards, though, it is not clear what "in order" means. Closest to the board is first? Video clarifies this, but writing it in is important.
Setup Pictures
7/7
Are skill cards dealt at random, or do we get the set shown? Face up? Face down?
Game Play
15/15
Under Hand Size - where do discarded cards go? Out of game? to discard piles? Irrational Anomaly instructions are confusing: 'until there conditions are met, eliminating them, you cannot use any systems' would be more clear. What happens to dead aliens? Out of game, or back to supply?
Game Play Pictures
5/7
Not essential, but a diagram showing operation of alerts would be good.
End Point
6/6
Complete & well explained.
Overall Comprehension
3/4
Clarity
3/3
Presentation
2/2
Shop Presentation 18/20
Ad
2/3
Ends abruptly.
Backdrop
1/1
Logo
1/1
Action Shots
4/5
Some show avatars, some show sticker pawns.
Description
5/5
Evocative & descriptive.
Video
5/5
A few graphics indicating the parts/areas under discussion would be good.