--Page 6: the Survivalist Game changes the rules for 2-6 versus 7-10 players. Yet the layout changes for 2-5 versus 6-10 players. This might cause confusion. Do the breaks have to be different?
--You should make it clear that the Pandemic card counts as one of the first-round cards. Instead of putting it on the "January" headline in setup, how about just putting it on top of the headline deck face down after shuffling? That makes step 2 of the setup section much simpler - the sentence "After determining how many rounds to play, flip additional headlines as needed" can be safely deleted.
--Second bullet of page 7: "Headline cards effects" should be "Headline card effects".
--The bottom two paragraphs on page 7 are redundant and may be safely omitted.
--The End of World Journal page 15: "Foods Cards" should be "Food Cards".
--There are quite a few complex rules in the "End of the World Journal". When the Game Play section says "For More Information", consider instead "For Important Information". Without learning the entire Journal, game play is more confusing.
--If I read this right, doing healthy things (like staying at home or using PPE) makes you LOSE this game. Wait, What?
--The Player-Layout illustration shows toilet paper covering the entire headline. In actual play, this should only cover the Reward section of the card, or perhaps be placed underneath it. Otherwise, later players in the rounds have to move them.
--"While this card is active" means what? During this round? For the rest of the game?
--The last sentence on page 11 is unnecessary and can be omitted (since Winning is at the top of the very next page).
--Do you make change if you put 5 Bad Luck points on a 4-point PPE card? This seems obvious, but is not specified.
--The Example Escape Phase is good - consider referencing it on page 8.